MCGARRETT: Danny go in first, go get him tiger
DANNY: they have 50 cals why the hell would i go in first
MCGARRETT go in first or ill shoot you
DANNY (danny goes in diveing from tree to trr avoiding 50 cal shots)
MCGARRETT thata boy danny you the man
DANNY get your ass over here Mcgarrett
MCGARRETT (Mcgarrett run in opisite direction
DANNY WHAT THE F***
MCGARRETT enter threw back of the house killing all the criminal's and walks out teh front door inviteing Danny In
DANNY can you tell me what shinnanigans your up to befor you almost get me killed next time
MCGARRETT no
DANNY of course not you like watching me get shot at
MCGARRETT yeap... book him dano
DANNY (arrests drug lord and throws him to ground with handcuffs
MCGARRETT see danny this job is simple
DANNY shut up
I LOVE that you did a play format (tapping into your theatre experience) but this is a "how fast can I finish to get Neuf off my back" effort. You have so much more to share... try a little.
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